Hagens
Joined: 15 Feb 2006 Posts: 20
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Posted: Mon Mar 06, 2006 4:28 pm Post subject: |
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Wow..... i'm not that great at the search engine thing yet, but there's so much wrong with that site, that i don't know how to begin.
First, and formost.... at the very bottom of your page, you have all that text in small font similar in color with the background. I've heard somewhere that some search engines can flag you for that.... not to mention all the horribly redundant keywords in one massive group.
Second, looking at your code, i see you have TWO 'bodies'.... don't know what you're doing there, but i'm sure it's not helping.
Third, you have a bunch of redundant keywords at the top, all in a row - "Los Angeles SUV Limousine, Los Angeles SUV Limo, Los Angeles Limousine, Los Angeles Limo, LA Limo"... throw that in the garbage.
Third, your 'meta-description' tag is horrible. Really need to expand that with a more clear, but descriptive sentance about your service/company.
Did you use a program to build that site? Which one? .... 'cause trying to read the code is making my brain hurt.
You might get much better placement if it were so much more simple, and to the point.... instead of the constant assault of 'La Limo, Los Angeles Limo... " etc.
Also, you need more backlinks to your site from other sites. Reciprical linking is good... if you properly walk the fine line. But a link just to you would be better (hard to get tho)
Speaking of backlinks (assuming someone else is reading this) - How often does Google update the backlink server/system (or whatever its called). They have links to my site that I don't even recognize, and I know there's a ton more out there. Does that backlink thing take a really long time or what? |
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